On Giving & Receiving Notes
How do you know who's feedback on your work to trust?
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A FEW RECOMMENDATIONS:
Daily journaling. It felt so impossible before I did it. I’m supposed to wake up every day and squeeze journaling into my already busy morning routine? Yet for the past month, I’ve journaled 3 pages (almost) every morning as part of The Artist’s Way, which is the most consistent journaling practice I’ve perhaps ever had. I’m sorry to say it, but daily journaling is a game-changer. It’s lowered my anxiety, connects me to the root cause of my feelings, and brings me closer to myself. On days when I don’t journal, I’m noticeably more irritable. The best part about it? It’s free self-care. You don’t need to pay for a meditation class or a massage. You simply need to bring your pen to paper every day for 20-30 minutes. If you can’t do it in the morning, that’s fine. Do it at lunch, or before bed. For me, committing to this practice has been a nurturing act of self-love that has genuinely improved my life. (I’d say it took two weeks for me to notice a difference, and now, I REALLY notice it).
The Oral History of Party Down, to honor the new season of Party Down coming to Starz and Hulu this Friday, treat yourself to this conversation between Adam Scott, Ken Marino, and Jane Lynch.
And lastly, I recommend Ayesha Siddiqi’s advice to a 30-year-old who spent years in a deep depression and now is suffering from regret over “wasting time”:
Time to dig into this week’s topic, which is focused on the craft and process of writing:
WHO’S OPINION ON MY WORK SHOULD I TRUST?
It is our job as writers to practice discernment when seeking outside opinions on our work, so our projects don’t end up like this pizza:
Asking for notes and feedback is a crucial part of the process, and it will improve your work if you can learn what feedback to accept, and when to push back.
There are some tried and tested rules: If multiple people are giving you the same note, it’s a story problem that you should address.
But often, lots of people give you lots of different notes, causing you to Frankenstein your story into something messier than it was when you sent it out for notes. Aka, the pizza script. In order to avoid that you must deeply know what you want to say with your work. You must constantly ask the question what is the story ultimately about at its core? Does this note get me closer or further from it?